Goodbye

March 25, 2012
By sumer44 GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
sumer44 GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
14 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
Friends come and friends go, but a true friend sticks by you like family.


Let me say goodbye
Stop asking why
I can't stop thinking of you
And can't  do what I want to do
Why won't you leave 
I'm not sure I believe 
You said it was the same for you
But do you feel like I do
I'm always sad
You were the best friend I ever had
We got so close
I never had to pose
Was what I was
And could tell you the cause 
But now I can not
My head feels like its in a knot 
I'm sorry it will end like this
I don't mean to dis 
I love you as a friend
But it has to end
I can't do anything 
Because you act like my wing
Right there 
And not going anywhere
But that is the problem
This seems to overwhelm 
The things I want to do now
Go ahead an ask how
It's what I want today
Tell your speech another day
Why do I always get stopped by you
It feels like you tell me what to do
But you aren't even here
I guess it is because you were so dear
Please just listen to me
I need you to let me be
You need to go away
There is no other way


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on Jul. 28 2012 at 4:00 pm
Thoughtsofthewise GOLD, New Orleans, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
Someone's thoughts may be as deep as the ocean, but if you're smart you will discover them.

this is very nice loved the rhythm

 


on Jul. 27 2012 at 1:00 pm
LongLazyDays55 BRONZE, Other, Other
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Favorite Quote:
I haven't failed. I just haven't found 10,000 ways that won't work. [Thomas Edison]

When words fail, music speaks.

Wow!!!! The rhyming's amazing! :) I love this poem. Most people can relate to this. Keep writing! :)

on May. 26 2012 at 5:15 pm
Behind_a_Plastic_Smile GOLD, Roseville, California
17 articles 1 photo 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
"if you're not 1st you're last"

you have great rhythm and flow and the poem itself is packed with emotion i love your writting style definately keep it up!

butterfly123 said...
on May. 26 2012 at 9:06 am
butterfly123, Banglore, Other
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hey! nice one! i want you to know that a poem just has to flow properly , it does not have to have a fixed rhyme scheme. try experimenting with irregular rhyming patterns. ...now about the poem...i like the language and wording. the emotion was maintained throughout the poem. great work and keep writing :D


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