Teen life!!!!!

March 21, 2012
Teenage! A world of amazement and colour,
Phosphorescent, ecstatic and full of vigour,
Vibrant as a rainbow, sparkling like a diamond,
It covers the world in a bright halo,
Filling one’s mind with credo,
Infinitesimal problems, a thousand hugs,
Every little mistake- Shucks!
Love and friendship prime,
Afflicting feelings a crime
So make it a better realm for dwelling
Bad thoughts shutting out and quelling!

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DanielM. said...
Apr. 22, 2012 at 3:08 am
Thats awesome.
Triumphant said...
Apr. 8, 2012 at 7:48 am
This is utterly amazing, it makes me think very bright and possitive thoughts
earthhashope said...
Mar. 27, 2012 at 9:28 am
Thank you very much!!!!
KateLA said...
Mar. 26, 2012 at 6:31 pm
You used great descriptions! I just loved the way you wrote this and you used various words like phosphorescent, vibrant, infinitesimal-that were really impressive and creative. You did a wonderful job!
Rachel23 said...
Mar. 26, 2012 at 3:21 pm
Nice poem! It was true, too. Bravo. Keep writing. :)
Midnight_Starsong said...
Mar. 26, 2012 at 7:06 am
I really enjoy it keep writing.
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