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If you were a river
And I was a boat,
I'd float to the center where we could elope.

If you were a bottle
Of smooth and rich brandy,
I'd gulp it all down and feel mighty dandy.

If you were a jar
Of smooth peanut butter,
I'd be the bread
Who's surface you'd smother.

So if you were anything
That came in a pair,
Forever and always
Together we'd share.





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Tghermione19 said...
Feb. 24, 2014 at 12:15 pm
Awwwwwwwwwwww this is so sweet, it makes me wish that my boyfriend never broke up with me. :'(     But I have no critque but I can agree with Belladona_Daughterof_Circe, it makes me want a PB and J sandwitch.
 
Belladona_Daughterof_Circe This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 4, 2012 at 7:50 pm
This makes me want a Peanut butter sandwich- and a boyfriend. XD GREAT JOB. XD
 
Winged.Living.Free. replied...
Apr. 14, 2012 at 8:23 pm
Pefect Poem ;D
 
thetruthawaits94 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 23, 2012 at 10:56 pm
Awww. ;) I like this poem a lot. It's so cute. I like the first stanza most because it seems the most original! Good job!
 
An-eloquent-leaf This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 19, 2012 at 8:43 pm
Oh nice poem- it's cute, I like it ^_^. My only nit-picky criticism would be to change "who's" to "whose," but other than that, it's great :)
 
LittleSully replied...
Mar. 19, 2012 at 8:48 pm
Wow, can't believe I didn'y catch that, thank you. I really have to get better with spelling and grammer.
 
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