Perfect Pair

March 16, 2012
By LittleSully GOLD, Elmwood Park, Illinois
LittleSully GOLD, Elmwood Park, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"The course of true love never did love smooth." William Shakespeare


If you were a river
And I was a boat,
I'd float to the center where we could elope.

If you were a bottle
Of smooth and rich brandy,
I'd gulp it all down and feel mighty dandy.

If you were a jar
Of smooth peanut butter,
I'd be the bread
Who's surface you'd smother.

So if you were anything
That came in a pair,
Forever and always
Together we'd share.


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on Feb. 24 2014 at 12:15 pm
Tghermione19 SILVER, Normal Hieghts, California
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Awwwwwwwwwwww this is so sweet, it makes me wish that my boyfriend never broke up with me. :'(     But I have no critque but I can agree with Belladona_Daughterof_Circe, it makes me want a PB and J sandwitch.

on Apr. 14 2012 at 8:23 pm
Free_One PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"I am not invincible or unstoppable, but I stay strong because it is the only way to survive in this world."

Pefect Poem ;D

on Apr. 4 2012 at 7:50 pm
Black_Veil_Bridesmaid GOLD, Frisco, Texas
10 articles 2 photos 93 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sui.icide is not cowardly. What is cowardly is making somebody hurt so much they want to kill themselves." Ashley Purdy
"Money can't buy happiness, but it can buy bacon, and thats pretty much the same thing." Andy Biersack
"Your not alone" Andy B

This makes me want a Peanut butter sandwich- and a boyfriend. XD GREAT JOB. XD

on Mar. 23 2012 at 10:56 pm
thetruthawaits94 SILVER, Duncan, Oklahoma
9 articles 0 photos 353 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass, but learning to dance in the rain.

Awww. ;) I like this poem a lot. It's so cute. I like the first stanza most because it seems the most original! Good job!

on Mar. 19 2012 at 8:48 pm
LittleSully GOLD, Elmwood Park, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The course of true love never did love smooth." William Shakespeare

Wow, can't believe I didn'y catch that, thank you. I really have to get better with spelling and grammer.

leafy said...
on Mar. 19 2012 at 8:43 pm
leafy, City, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Gil: I would like you to read my novel and get your opinion. 
Ernest Hemingway: I hate it. 
Gil: You haven't even read it yet. 
Ernest Hemingway: If it's bad, I'll hate it. If it's good, then I'll be envious and hate it even more. You don't want the opinion of another writer. 

Oh nice poem- it's cute, I like it ^_^. My only nit-picky criticism would be to change "who's" to "whose," but other than that, it's great :)


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