I Think I Love You

February 21, 2012
By kread18 DIAMOND, Berkeley, California
kread18 DIAMOND, Berkeley, California
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I think I love you, you eclectic jerk
Your every flaw, your every quirk
That painful glare, your disregard
Your comebacks when they’re cold and hard

I maybe love the way it stings
The times you tell me awful things
Your smile when it’s dripping pride
And disrespects the other side

When your conceit controls your vision
Exposes your sinful disposition
When you laugh, and it’s like a threat
A joke that only you can get

I think I love you and your dirty smirk
The way you lie like fixed clockwork
Your callused hands, your rough raw lips
Your wandering gaze, the way it slips

I just might love the way you boast
The way you yell, but still get close
Your abrasive touch, your shifting whims
You deceptions, each with countless victims

I could be wrong, I could be senseless
But within my heart I feel defenseless
There might be something wrong with me
But I simply love your flawed beauty.



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MMOON PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 19 2013 at 7:53 pm
MMOON PLATINUM, Bellingham, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Sop being afriad of what could go wrong. Start being positive about what could go right"
I also have another "Loving someone is like hugging a cactus. The harder you hold the more it hurts"

WOW!! That was beautiful! Keep writing. I really enjoyed it and was amazed. Please read, comment and rate my poems!Thanks!!

so_joy SILVER said...
on Aug. 15 2012 at 9:09 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

Great! Good job! You're very talented. Please read,rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!

Oreozz SILVER said...
on Mar. 16 2012 at 8:13 pm
Oreozz SILVER, Palmer, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"The only thing I would change about you is your last name"

Your words have left me breathless! It was so beautiful the way you conveyed it I feel amazed right now by the beauty in your poem. You have a true gift!!


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