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Not good enough

March 4, 2012
By bmad66 SILVER, Duchesne, Utah
bmad66 SILVER, Duchesne, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
people havn't always been there for me, but music has.


I wish you were mine,
Can't figure out why your not,
It's cause I'm not good enough,
You deserve the best,
Your a queen,
And that's how you should be treated,
I wish you were mine,
But I'm not the one,
You deserve a prince,
Not me,
That's why your not mine,
I hope you find the one,
And know somebody loves you,
Even if it's not them,
There is still somebody,
It's me,
But I'm not good enough,
Not good enough for you,


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on Mar. 5 2012 at 10:02 pm
TheGirlWhoReachesForStars SILVER, Morrisville, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
\"Imperfection is beauty; madness is genius.
and its better to be absolutely ridiculous
than absolutely boring.\"
-Marilyn Monroe

(: I love the feeling in this! The emotions are awesome, and very relatable; however, you need to look at your grammar and spelling.  Some of it is wrong, and that can take away from the poem's content :)

on Mar. 5 2012 at 9:29 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2206 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

This one's quite nice, though some of your spelling's off. That doesn't always matter, because the feelings and the story you explore here is rather well-put and off the beaten path. You improve fast :)