Until the day

March 3, 2012
By bmad66 SILVER, Duchesne, Utah
bmad66 SILVER, Duchesne, Utah
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people havn't always been there for me, but music has.

I need you,
To change my life,
Set me on a straight path,
Make me a better man,
Change my mood,
Make me happy,
Like I never am,
If you were mine,
You would be my queen,
My life,
But you don't notice me,
Sometimes i wonder if you know I exist,
You can change my life,
Make set me straight,
But I am eternally lost,
Until the day,
I can call you mine

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.king. SILVER said...
on Mar. 7 2012 at 7:51 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
9 articles 4 photos 573 comments

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It's Good I like it, I got a little confused, But most of all love the Poems Title, I like the emotions, Except that it's missing something :/, I'm not sure what it is, But Congrats for now, Very Good poetic Write there Bmad :D !!!


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