Playing With Fire

February 15, 2012
By AVERAGE BRONZE, Rosehill, Virginia
AVERAGE BRONZE, Rosehill, Virginia
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I see the burning in your eyes.
I feel the heat of your skin against mine.
Your smokey breath fills my chest, as the press of your lips lets me melt away.
Within my heart is fiery blaze smoldering the breath of my lungs
And i give to you a sizzling taste of my tongue.
You were all too strong to be contained
but playing with fire is my favorite game.

The author's comments:
It's about my love for someone.

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on Apr. 20 2012 at 10:32 am
sherberteater GOLD, Fruita, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Friends are God's way of apologizing to us for our families."

Thank God for friends like you!

Hey, this is AWESOME!!!!! I <3 it so much. You did a great job describing it. I love it so much!!! great job!

AVERAGE BRONZE said...
on Apr. 18 2012 at 10:33 am
AVERAGE BRONZE, Rosehill, Virginia
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no problem !:)

on Apr. 17 2012 at 5:36 pm
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

Of course!  If you don't mind checking out my work, I'd appreciate it as well :)  I just looked and saw that you commented on one of my articles, I posted quite a few more since then.  Thanks a bunch!

AVERAGE BRONZE said...
on Apr. 17 2012 at 10:28 am
AVERAGE BRONZE, Rosehill, Virginia
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thank you thank you thank you :) ..if you dont mind will you pass word around for people to check out my work it would be greatly appreciated. .....if i am able to find my poetry book i will post more (i lost it :/)

on Apr. 13 2012 at 4:35 pm
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
8 articles 13 photos 488 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

Well I know I'm interested!  You're so talented!  The wording in this is phenomenal and I could feel all these sensations as you described them, which you did PERFECTLY!!! <3  I love it! :)

AVERAGE BRONZE said...
on Apr. 13 2012 at 11:09 am
AVERAGE BRONZE, Rosehill, Virginia
3 articles 0 photos 48 comments
thank you so much. your comment meant alot to me honest. :,)....i just wish i could get more people interested in my work

on Mar. 9 2012 at 7:48 am
loveissmiles GOLD, Lynn, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"I live for the nights I can't remember with the people I will never forget." -Carassisa M-<3

"What the mind can perceive, the body can achieve." -Softball Coach Steve B-

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!! I LOVE THIS. IT IS PERFECT, PERFECT PERFECT PERFECT!!! DO NOT EVER CHANGE THIS, AND I KNOW HOW U FEEL, ALL TO WELL. :)


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