Report Abuse Home > All Poetry > Ribbon Ribbon By abigailaaden, Topsfield, MA More by this author Reaching towards an Infinite wasteland, I Begged for release. Broken in motion and Onward instead, yet Never to find peace. « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion This article has 2 comments. Post your own! Report abuse S M Wells said... Feb. 19, 2012 at 6:24 pm: The first words caught my eye, and I recognized the poetic touch. Somhow though I thought the last line could use a little more thinking through. Don't misunderstand me; good work. abigailaaden replied... Feb. 19, 2012 at 10:13 pm : Thanks! I appreciate the comment
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