February 15, 2012
Reaching towards an
Infinite wasteland, I
Begged for release.
Broken in motion and
Onward instead, yet
Never to find peace.

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S M Wells said...
Feb. 19, 2012 at 6:24 pm
The first words caught my eye, and I recognized the poetic touch. Somhow though I thought the last line could use a little more thinking through. Don't misunderstand me; good work.
abigailaaden This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 19, 2012 at 10:13 pm
Thanks! I appreciate the comment
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