Angel

February 2, 2012
if there were such things as angels
He'd be mine.
Hair as golden as rolling fields
Skin as glowing as candle light
Teeth that are as white as the purest snow,
and if he had wings, they'd be a creamy white.
My angel has a heart as big as a whale
and his soul makes the sun seem dim.
My angel, my angel
as sweet as can be
My angel, my angel
come be with me





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ZhadaMone said...
Apr. 3, 2012 at 2:35 pm
This was really good. Keep writing, never stop. :)
 
callmeike said...
Mar. 21, 2012 at 10:54 pm
This is very well written. I'm not much of a poetry reader but I love what you did. You kept it short very detailed that painted a picture in my head of the angel. Well done! I hope to see more from you :)
 
holyblondecheerleaderbatman said...
Mar. 21, 2012 at 10:23 pm

really cute poem i love it!!!!!!!!

 

 
Shadowfoxz said...
Mar. 14, 2012 at 7:35 pm
Really cute poem. Idealism makes the title very fitting :)
 
Joshua. said...
Mar. 13, 2012 at 10:03 pm
Good Stuff :)
 
JesusFreak3 said...
Mar. 5, 2012 at 10:18 pm
awww! that's really sweet and I like your word choice :-)
 
lvamp1192 said...
Mar. 2, 2012 at 6:09 pm
really good u really wanted the writer and the angel to be united in the end....have them come together and everything be perfect :)
 
B-Artistic said...
Feb. 24, 2012 at 9:31 am
i wish i was that angel.....!!
 
B-Artistic replied...
Feb. 24, 2012 at 9:34 am
great poem!!
 
Angelgirl39 replied...
Feb. 24, 2012 at 11:09 am
Jealous? Haha, im glad u liked the poem, B.
 
Firetip This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 16, 2012 at 9:27 pm
5/5 Fo shizzle. Nicely done.
 
Emopanda39 replied...
Feb. 16, 2012 at 10:09 pm
thank you so much Fire!
 
-Ash- said...
Feb. 12, 2012 at 8:05 pm
this is soooo good! its amazing! 5/5 :D
 
Angelgirl39 replied...
Feb. 12, 2012 at 8:07 pm
thanks ash, it means a lot
 
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