The Best and Worst days of your Life .

February 7, 2012
By JustPaperAndPencil BRONZE, Milford, Ohio
JustPaperAndPencil BRONZE, Milford, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
The saddest thing in the world, is loving someone who used to love you.


The Best day of your life ; Is the best thing is having the golden ticket.
The Worst day of your life, is having that golden ticket, but loosing it .

On the best ay of your life, your as happy as the little kid on christmas morning.
On the worst day of your life your as sad as the little boy who only finds coal in there stocking.

On the best day of your life your smile is as big and bright as the sun.
On the worst day of your life is as droopy as the little boy's who's baseball game was cancled due to rain.

On the best day of your life you're like a chatterbox without a pause button.
On the worst day of your life you as silent as a mime.

On the best day of your life, your the exciting timmer waiting to go off saying that the cookies are done.
On the worst day of your life your the ticking time bomb that can't be disfused.

On the best day of your life you're a heart filled with joy.
On the worst day of your life you're a broken heart that shattered on the floor.

The worst day of your life may cause much hurt,
But it can be the best with a little hard work .


The author's comments:
i had to write this , for an 8th grade poetry assignment . we had to choose two things, in the same topic to compare in our poem. I was going to do peanut butter and jelly, but I wanted to do something with more meaning. Hopefully you like it (: Comment and rate pleasee ! (:

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on Feb. 12 2012 at 5:12 pm
JustPaperAndPencil BRONZE, Milford, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
The saddest thing in the world, is loving someone who used to love you.

Thank You (:

Aaka131 SILVER said...
on Feb. 11 2012 at 8:14 pm
Aaka131 SILVER, Dunbar, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind." -Dr. Seuss

Love this and the comparisons are great. Its well thought out and also fun to read:)


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