my broken valentine

February 2, 2012
By electra_wolf BRONZE, Colorado City, Texas
electra_wolf BRONZE, Colorado City, Texas
2 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
I might hide behind a fake smile, but the rest of me is real!


The pain went away long ago,
but your still so freaking mental.
You're trying to win me back,thats low,
my heart is not your rental.
Now your heart is breaking,
cause i won't come back.
In my eye's you're fading,
and your heart is turning black.
When I look at you,
you seem so love struck.
You act like you're cut in two,
and it seems your in a muck.
It's valentines day,
and you're in pain.
You hand me your heart,
I look at you shocked.
A tear goes down your face,
and in it I see lonliness and pain.
I look at your heart,
and I see it's dying.
I feel a little sorry now,
and i cut a little chunk of my heart out.
And give it to you,
my broken valentine.


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on Feb. 8 2012 at 8:44 am
chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet.

Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.

Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

yep lol.....

on Feb. 7 2012 at 8:41 pm
electra_wolf BRONZE, Colorado City, Texas
2 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
I might hide behind a fake smile, but the rest of me is real!

lol ok chloe and is it good

on Feb. 7 2012 at 8:04 pm
chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
19 articles 13 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet.

Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.

Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

By the way I responded to your response on Hatred.

on Feb. 7 2012 at 8:02 pm
chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
19 articles 13 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet.

Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.

Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

OMG lex yours got accepted and I haven't even posted my poem "payback, my broken valentine" yet. lol.


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