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Sunset Love

January 23, 2012
By PoetryAngel14 PLATINUM, Ithaca, New York
PoetryAngel14 PLATINUM, Ithaca, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Dare to be imperfect and one day there will tug at your sleeve a soulmate." ~Robert Brault
"Life is like riding a bicycle - in order to keep your balance, you must keep moving." ~Albert Einstein


The sun goes down,

All around,

The feeling of love in the air.

Around her, his arm,

On old Daddy’s farm,

Next to the old black mare.

Slowly his lips

Take graceful dips,

‘Till finally they find hers.

She shivers with chill,

Way up on that hill,

He wraps her in glorious furs.

They snuggle up near,

That moment, so dear,

As time patiently waits.

With years to go,

She didn’t quite know,

That he was her soulmate.


The author's comments:
As I was writing this, I looked out the window to see the blazing red-orange sunset streaked across the sky. I then thought of how sweet it would be for a young couple to be watching the same sunset on a hill. I hope that beautiful image comes to your mind as well.

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on Mar. 18 2012 at 10:04 am
PoetryAngel14 PLATINUM, Ithaca, New York
26 articles 0 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Dare to be imperfect and one day there will tug at your sleeve a soulmate." ~Robert Brault
"Life is like riding a bicycle - in order to keep your balance, you must keep moving." ~Albert Einstein

thanks for your feedback

illusions GOLD said...
on Feb. 29 2012 at 10:28 pm
illusions GOLD, I Dontg Even Like This Town, Other
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nt my fav but good job


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