"Left With Nothing"

January 26, 2012
My mom never told me
I would have to give away
every piece of the puzzle till
I was left with nothing.

So, I just divide it up
and distribute to dozens.

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hippiechick99 said...
Apr. 19, 2012 at 8:16 am
In my opinion this could have been much longer. I love the idea of it, maybe you should elaborate on your feelings and experiences. I'm not trying to be mean... I'm just giving you my personal opinion.
LaceeJade This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 26, 2012 at 7:32 pm
Your not being mean:) thanks for all the feedback and it's funny you would say that because i took this idea and twisted it into a poem,
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