"Left With Nothing"

January 26, 2012
By LaceeJade GOLD, Bucyrus, Ohio
LaceeJade GOLD, Bucyrus, Ohio
17 articles 4 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
♥ I've made mistakes in my life. i've let people take advantage of me, and i accepted way less than i deserve. But, i've learned from my bad choices, and even though there are some things i can never get back and people who will never be sorry. i'll know better next time and i wont settle for anything less than i deserve. ♥


My mom never told me
I would have to give away
every piece of the puzzle till
I was left with nothing.

So, I just divide it up
and distribute to dozens.



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LaceeJade GOLD said...
on Apr. 26 2012 at 7:32 pm
LaceeJade GOLD, Bucyrus, Ohio
17 articles 4 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
♥ I've made mistakes in my life. i've let people take advantage of me, and i accepted way less than i deserve. But, i've learned from my bad choices, and even though there are some things i can never get back and people who will never be sorry. i'll know better next time and i wont settle for anything less than i deserve. ♥

Your not being mean:) thanks for all the feedback and it's funny you would say that because i took this idea and twisted it into a poem,

on Apr. 19 2012 at 8:16 am
hippiechick99 GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
11 articles 0 photos 224 comments

Favorite Quote:
"... How dreary to be somebody-- How public like a frog;
To tell one's name; the livelong June-- To an admiring bog"
-Emily Dickinson

In my opinion this could have been much longer. I love the idea of it, maybe you should elaborate on your feelings and experiences. I'm not trying to be mean... I'm just giving you my personal opinion.


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