My Experience With God

June 30, 2008
By Emily Cinquemani, Simpsonville, SC

The sun ditched me
He is hiding behind the clouds
I thought he wouldn't
but he did
I shouldn't have trusted him
now I am alone
left in the mercy of

the sun steps out
from the clouds
and laughs
I, shamfully, happily
hear his message:
"Did you really think I would leave you?"

He wouldn't, and He never did
I can see the light through the clouds

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bubj98 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 10 2010 at 5:37 pm
bubj98 BRONZE, Oceanside, California
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Favorite Quote:
"hate is a strong word ,but love is a stronger one"
"sometimes batteries help when the little robot inside your head stops working"
"i guess that guy over there is like...alive?"

i really like this. i think the expressions are great

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