My Real Dad

January 14, 2012
By poohbear02 BRONZE, Vinita, Oklahoma
poohbear02 BRONZE, Vinita, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"Spiteful words can hurt your feelings but silence breakes your heart"
"Tears are the safty valve of the heart when too much pressure is laid on it"
"Hold my hand just one more time, so i can remind myself why is it that i can't get over you"


He was always lazy
And would always stay inside
Everyone knew he was crazy
And he loved to hide

He had kids everyone knows
But he acted like he didn't care
And he never shows
That he would share

During his life with us all
He was always in pain
Especially in the fall
Because he was so insane

His love was never shown


The author's comments:
I wrote this poem becuse my mom divoriced my real dad and afterwards it always felt like my real dad never wanted to have anything to do with us girls, I love my dad more than anything in the world. To me it feels like my dad is not around anymore and i hope other dad's out there read this and know that someday that's wat their kids are going to feel like when they block them out of their lives. Hope you like the poem.

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on Jan. 22 2012 at 8:45 pm
poohbear02 BRONZE, Vinita, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"Spiteful words can hurt your feelings but silence breakes your heart"
"Tears are the safty valve of the heart when too much pressure is laid on it"
"Hold my hand just one more time, so i can remind myself why is it that i can't get over you"

ya but my mom remarried and my real dad is never around so i wrote this to tell him how i feel and it made him cry but he has alot to do with mine and my sisters life now and that makes us all happy ;)

on Jan. 22 2012 at 8:42 pm
Crazymexican GOLD, Jay, Maine
12 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
not sure

My parents divorced too I know how it was and it stunk. But mine are back togther but i know how it is


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