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I am trapped inside your love;
I am a prisoner of your heart.
You are always on my mind.
You are the inspiration to my art;
the reason I draw and paint,
the only reason I smile.
When I talk to you I feel faint.
If I even hear your name, my
heart flies to the moon and back.
The day you left my whole world died and my fragile heart cracked.
I fell so deep I drowned
in a sea of lies
that I told to hide my thoughts
and cover up my yearning cries.
If I had just one chance,
I know I could be the best.
Please take my heart once more
and put my sincerity to the test.





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XCBVIA said...
Sept. 13, 2013 at 9:12 pm
Btw, i don't know if i answered your question in another of your work's comments but yes i do like Edgar Allen Poe. And you should know who i am by now and you have flourished quite considerably since i left and that is so awesome! i'm glad for you! anyways, talk to you later! :D
 
tealbird said...
Jan. 28, 2012 at 5:30 pm
I'm always a little bit jealous of those who can succeed in writing poetry (I'm much more of a short story person--poetry is too hard for me), and you, my friend, have added to that. (In a wonderful way of course!) This is great.
 
chloe_garrett replied...
Jan. 30, 2012 at 8:15 am
Lol. Thanks. You're sweet. I write poetry, short stories, novels, and everything else. :P i cant wait to check out your page.
 
JOKelly said...
Jan. 28, 2012 at 2:45 pm
I like the emotion. I think your puntuation is great!
 
chloe_garrett replied...
Jan. 30, 2012 at 8:16 am
thanks. In the poem, I just sort of come to a state of realizing, "hey, I screwed up. I need you back", and i put it into stanzas. That is basically how I write ALL my poems. Based off real situations.
 
lucybrown said...
Jan. 28, 2012 at 12:57 pm
This is really good. It has so much emotion and I like the rhythm to it. Nice job!
 
chloe_garrett replied...
Jan. 28, 2012 at 1:04 pm
thank you! :D
 
WrittenEmotions said...
Jan. 28, 2012 at 12:36 pm
Freaking beautiful! I know exactly where tire coming from! 5/5
 
chloe_garrett replied...
Jan. 28, 2012 at 12:46 pm
Thank you :D I loved your poem too :D
 
brainiac said...
Jan. 28, 2012 at 11:24 am
Nice, very intense.
 
chloe_garrett replied...
Jan. 28, 2012 at 11:27 am
Thank you :D I didn't quite like this one very much. It's definitely not my best by far.
 
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