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Captivity

December 18, 2011
By ...darkangel... SILVER, Princeton, Indiana
...darkangel... SILVER, Princeton, Indiana
7 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't focus on the BACK THEN, focus on the RIGHT NOW and the COMING UP. Those are the important things.


I lie here deeply bleeding,
Yet there you lay soundly sleeping.
I call for you but you don't stir.
I begin to wonder if we ever were.
I begin to cry ever so quietly,
Death is shaking violently .
Sound asleep, there you lie,
As if waiting for me to die.
As the dark creeps up and over,
My tears trickle down forever.
I feast my eyes upon captivity,
You'll forever sleep and never be free.



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on Feb. 7 2012 at 4:42 pm
...darkangel... SILVER, Princeton, Indiana
7 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't focus on the BACK THEN, focus on the RIGHT NOW and the COMING UP. Those are the important things.

Thank you i very much appriciate it view my other poems and comment if you want thank you

KateLA GOLD said...
on Jan. 24 2012 at 9:47 pm
KateLA GOLD, Everett, Washington
11 articles 20 photos 194 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don’t you find it Funny that after Monday(M) and Tuesday(T), the rest of the week says WTF?
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Very dark, I like it. I think you did a great job-5/5!