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Not Anymore.

January 12, 2012
By Rainbeauxs SILVER, Bridgetown, Other
Rainbeauxs SILVER, Bridgetown, Other
7 articles 3 photos 42 comments

They cackle,I cry.
Their words I cannot deny.
They're the predator.
I'm the prey.
Constantly attacked and torn down everyday.
I feel so inferior.
I let them feel superior.
I let them walk all over me.
They turned me into a person,I dreaded that I'd be.

Ugly was my favourite word.
I said it every day.
When I looked into the mirror,that's all I would say.
They hated me and I hated me too.
Their words stabbed me,so harsh yet so true.

I wanted to scream,I wanted to blurt.
''CAN ANYONE SEE I'M HURTING ?!''
But my voice goes unheard.
As do my thoughts and my words.
But not anymore.


The author's comments:
I really didn't know what to christen this piece ^^_____^^.

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elizamc83 GOLD said...
on Aug. 21 2012 at 5:46 pm
elizamc83 GOLD, Concord, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"From now on, I don't care if my tea leaves spell 'Die, Ron, die,' I'm chucking them in the bin where they belong." -Ron Weasley

I like this poem a lot! It really shows how someone can start to believe what bullies are saying to them, and you showed it in a creative way with really good rhyming. Nice job and keep on writing!

elizamc83 GOLD said...
on Aug. 21 2012 at 5:46 pm
elizamc83 GOLD, Concord, Massachusetts
17 articles 0 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
"From now on, I don't care if my tea leaves spell 'Die, Ron, die,' I'm chucking them in the bin where they belong." -Ron Weasley

I like this poem a lot! It really shows how someone can start to believe what bullies are saying to them, and you showed it in a creative way with really good rhyming. Nice job and keep on writing!

on Jan. 18 2012 at 9:09 pm
Rainbeauxs SILVER, Bridgetown, Other
7 articles 3 photos 42 comments
Thank you so much! ;D .I really appreciate it!

Phoenix. said...
on Jan. 18 2012 at 9:07 pm
Phoenix., Pittsfield, Pennsylvania
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AMAZING I LOVE IT GREAT JOB!

on Jan. 18 2012 at 9:03 pm
Rainbeauxs SILVER, Bridgetown, Other
7 articles 3 photos 42 comments
Thank you biz! :D .Ahaa,means a bunch to me

on Jan. 14 2012 at 8:45 am
Wired_To_Inspire PLATINUM, Coopersburg, Pennsylvania
49 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Your mind fights the battles, but your heart wins the war." -Liz Ruth

This has a very stong meaning to it. Good work! You keep that up because what you have going here is a good thing... keep at it.

on Jan. 13 2012 at 4:05 pm
Rainbeauxs SILVER, Bridgetown, Other
7 articles 3 photos 42 comments
Thank you Lashonti!(: I really appreciate the comment. :D

on Jan. 13 2012 at 2:47 pm
Rainbeauxs SILVER, Bridgetown, Other
7 articles 3 photos 42 comments
Oh my goodness!You have no idea how much that means to me!Thank you so much! :D

Mani2x SILVER said...
on Jan. 13 2012 at 2:28 pm
Mani2x SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
8 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
I was born an original, I'm not going to die a copy.

This is great.! I love your emotion. It so reminds me of what I was going through.

Lovejuice GOLD said...
on Jan. 13 2012 at 1:03 pm
Lovejuice GOLD,
19 articles 0 photos 55 comments
Wow! I really love the rhyming you used here. You display an impressive mastery of the pen, and I really hope that you continue writing. I'll be sure to check out the rest of your work.


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