Then They're Gone

January 8, 2012
By n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
"It's better to be hated for who you are than to be loved for what you are not."





~Luara Moncur


Up up and then there gone
Never to be seen again,
They take the entrance in
And they create an exit out,
Stepping in to save the day
Than giving up and walking away,
How are we suppose to see
What agape love is to be?
When all they do is waltz on in;Sweep you off your feet
Only to drop you and watch you fall in defeat.
They build their lies, the way they build your hope
And than they wreck it before any one knows
Leaving you the same old mess
Only worse cause now you trust people even less.


The author's comments:
People seem to walk in and out; even 'on top' of your life- then just leave...no one ever sticks around long enough to be the change.

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on Jan. 14 2012 at 4:46 pm
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
83 articles 23 photos 232 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's better to be hated for who you are than to be loved for what you are not."





~Luara Moncur

Yes it was a difficult time..thanks!!

on Jan. 14 2012 at 3:10 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

Whoa, so much anger and pain in this... I love it also! 5/5


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