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The Big Place

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The race cars are ready starting their gas
When the green light went on a gust of wind passed.
The race cars rode dangerously around the circular track
Seeking a win for the big point stack.
In the final lap the green car was in first
All the other race cars were cursed.
In the last lap all the race cars were as fast as a lightning bolt
But one race car driver who was a boy one time and now a young man stood out, the super,green colt.
Spinning a donut around the grass in cheer
In a few years this boy will compete in NASCAR with no fear.





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DarkestSunshine said...
Jan. 30, 2012 at 4:28 pm
I need some feedback from good poets so please look at my stuff and comment.
 
Tyra J. said...
Jul. 7, 2010 at 1:01 pm
Nice. Is this about you?
 
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