The Big Place

March 19, 2008
By dj cook, Wakefield, MA

The race cars are ready starting their gas
When the green light went on a gust of wind passed.
The race cars rode dangerously around the circular track
Seeking a win for the big point stack.
In the final lap the green car was in first
All the other race cars were cursed.
In the last lap all the race cars were as fast as a lightning bolt
But one race car driver who was a boy one time and now a young man stood out, the super,green colt.
Spinning a donut around the grass in cheer
In a few years this boy will compete in NASCAR with no fear.

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on Jan. 30 2012 at 4:28 pm
DarkestSunshine GOLD, Mill Valley, California
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Favorite Quote:
Doubt me...I dare you

I need some feedback from good poets so please look at my stuff and comment.

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on Jul. 7 2010 at 1:01 pm
Sencere BRONZE, Annapolis, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
Why am I fighting to live, when I'm just living to fight. Why am I trying to see when there ain't nothing in sight. Why am I trying to give when no one gives me a try. Why am I dying to live, when I'm just living to die.

Nice. Is this about you?

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