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Body on Land; Foot in Water

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Her body on land
Her foot in water
in 2006
We lost my mothers daughter
my fathers daughter
my little sister
No one knows how much
I’ve missed her

It happened so fast
My heart needs a cast
Why do the great things never last?
I loved her so
and she’ll never know
She meant so much to me
I miss you Mille




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Sencere said...
Jul. 7, 2010 at 6:46 pm:
I like how you took your feelings for your sister and was able to make a great poem
 
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Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 15, 2010 at 6:31 pm:
wow!!!! this is amazing!!! i love it-i'm so sorry though-i can feel your pain...but you express it in such a great way.
 
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