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My Assassination

Life is a knife
Stuck in us all
The more we remove it
The farther we fall
Keep my hand on the handle
Just twist it a bit
Feel my lungs just tremble
Coughing Fit
My breath is a whisper
The pain is a scream
No one is listening
Don’t get what I mean
My legs were just shaking
I fall on my knees
All you people just stab me
A thousand bees
I plunge the knife deeper
Your raising the blade
Sunshine is fading
You welcome the shade
The blade swings
I dodge it, And fall
My death isn’t noticed
Uncared for by all



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brokedownandlonely said...
Jan. 10, 2012 at 7:18 pm
i can see the symbolism good job putting it out there the way you did
 
NightGoddess17This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 10, 2012 at 6:54 pm
the emotion and iction is beautiful!!! great job recurring!!!
 
recurring_resilience replied...
Jan. 10, 2012 at 6:56 pm
Thanks Night! :D
 
Fabala_G said...
Jan. 10, 2012 at 6:50 pm
Wow. I think that I probably the best poem I've read on this site. So much emotion! Excellent work!
 
recurring_resilience replied...
Jan. 10, 2012 at 6:55 pm
Thanks Fabala! I'm truly flattered by that compliment! :)
 
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