Smile :)

January 6, 2012
By EvonkaH BRONZE, Lakeland, Georgia
EvonkaH BRONZE, Lakeland, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"Amor no es Amor"
Prepare for the worst and hope for the best.


They desire to know what happened to that gleeful cheery soul?
They cannot grasp the concept that it will cease to be no more.
An enigma they say as they refer to darkness' ways.
After she was claimed by Sheol that soul they don't dare to reclaim.
Eerie bliss settles in the dark forsakened place.
Plentiful smiles they don't remove from their face.
I guess it finally hit them after 12 years went by,
that they finally began to ponder on why doesn't that pretty girl crack a smile.
A happy soul she use to be.
She jumped around so cheerfully.
But dumped into a silence of disgrace
she always mangaes to store away the smile on her face.
She traded it to the Devil that she may have peace of mind
because the constant problems overwhelmed her and made her go blind.
She lost her way after that
to the ends of the earth and the depths of the sea she did stray.
Alone she walks quietly for a million miles.
Yes alone she lurks the girl who use to smile.



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on Jan. 27 2012 at 3:47 pm
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"If you know how you feel, and so clearly what you need to say, you'll know it. I don't think you should wait. I think you should speak now." -Taylor Swift

yw =) and cool, but i meant the poem itself being in a poetry book :P but oooo making/extending the poem itself into a book sounds good! :) (lol i hope i read that right xD)

EvonkaH BRONZE said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 6:27 am
EvonkaH BRONZE, Lakeland, Georgia
4 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Amor no es Amor"
Prepare for the worst and hope for the best.

Thank you so much. I think I will turn this into a book once I get some ideas. :)

on Jan. 24 2012 at 5:03 pm
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
20 articles 3 photos 388 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you know how you feel, and so clearly what you need to say, you'll know it. I don't think you should wait. I think you should speak now." -Taylor Swift

You know, i could totally see this being in a book. Really. It's just got that...sound to it. My favorite part goes from the line "A happy soul she used to be" to the end =) good job! 5/5 and woo, i'm first to comment! :D




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