The Moose

December 20, 2011
Moosey is watching.
Lying in wait.
Watching your actions,
Controlling your fate.

Moosey is jury.
Moosey is judge.
Moosey won't argue,
For Moosey won't budge.

Moosey wants darkness.
That is his goal.
If you defy him,
He'll rip out your soul.

Moosey is coming.
That much is clear.
Think he won't find you?
He's already here.

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ElizabethWaldie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 21, 2012 at 11:55 am
"This moose deserves a poem" = best line ever :) You're really talented, you know that? I read all of your work, and it's great. You should consider self-publishing.
ThePelicanKing replied...
Jan. 24, 2012 at 10:48 am
Hi, Elizabeth! Just wanted to thank you for your awesomely generous comments. I stopped by your account, and am very impressed. (I especially liked "Most Painful Kind of Numb," Daren's the best.) Hope to read more of your stuff soon!
TheMusicGuru This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 24, 2012 at 4:15 pm
Thank you, good sir. I'm glad you like my work. "The Most Painful Kind Of Numb" was fun & difficult at the same time, but I agree, Daren is one of the most amazing characters I've written about. He was fun to create ;) can't wait to hear more from YOU, too, Mr. Pelican King!
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