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Hypocritical Queen

What is true but never seen,
Only to you, hypocritical queen.
From the darkness to the light,
Sending forth your bravest knight.
Claiming to protect land, air and sea,
Though a guardian you shall never be.
Through emerald eyes many knaves will gaze,
In need of completion, the hard maze.
Trials of betrayal a king shall face,
Only to tend again to her grace.
Thou be made a jester, made a fool
Never to escape her majesty, cruel.
Queen of fire, queen of fight,
Queen of pain and grueling fright,
Tell this tale forever seen,
Only not by you, my hypocritical queen.



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CharlesDickens said...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 6:07 pm
Pretty good!!! :D
 
CarrieAnn13 said...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 5:50 pm
This is a really beautiful poem! I appreciate the proper grammar and punctuation as well as your superb vocabulary. You also put in enough effort to make it rhyme, so excellent work! This is going on my favourites list.
 
sany.lastflame replied...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 5:52 pm
Thank you so much! I did put a lot of work into this poem becasue it has meaning! So I really appreaciate the comment.
 
Fabala_G said...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 5:25 pm
I like the context you put this in! Very cool!
 
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