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Sleepless nights, tight nights
Hours awake and no sleep I can bake
To me it’s just a lake
The return of the pale

Every year
I hear the same breeze
I see the same dreams
I feel the same scene

And also the thought is not gone
I know this is low thinking
That someday my mind will blow away
And flow to the north
But it’s okay
Because I’ll be graved in my favourite zone



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haley854 said...
Jan. 10, 2012 at 6:56 pm:
i really like it. were you trying to rhyme? becausse if you were i feel like you should contiune you that throughout the entire poem. otherwise very nice!
 
artmantist replied...
Jan. 22, 2012 at 8:22 pm :
tnx , 4 the feedback, we ll keep in in mind
 
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alicecullen said...
Jan. 9, 2012 at 9:40 pm:
i love this one... i felt it. pleasure reading it :)
 
artmantist replied...
Jan. 22, 2012 at 8:21 pm :
tnx, glad u liked it
 
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SeizeTheDay said...
Jan. 9, 2012 at 8:43 pm:
Amazing. This really took me away from my life for a moment.. And that's what everyone wants nowadays, right? Beautifully written, and to the point. 5/5!! Keep up the awesome work!! :D
 
artmantist replied...
Jan. 22, 2012 at 8:20 pm :
tnk u very much, glad u liked it
 
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InvisibleHeart said...
Jan. 3, 2012 at 8:58 pm:
Beautiful. Your words are simply graceful. I feel as if I just traveled to your zone. I like it very much. Keep writing. ;)
 
artmantist replied...
Jan. 3, 2012 at 8:59 pm :
tnx very much
 
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Pngsaxin said...
Jan. 3, 2012 at 4:16 pm:
Awesome! This poem really really speaks to me!
 
artmantist replied...
Jan. 3, 2012 at 4:19 pm :
tnx, it took me 3 weeks to put it together, but i wrote it in 5 min. lol
 
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