Change You

December 27, 2011
By _emilia_ SILVER, Somers Point, New Jersey
_emilia_ SILVER, Somers Point, New Jersey
9 articles 3 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you're going through hell, keep going."


When I first saw you, you struck me, like lightning.
I could not breathe, and I found it exciting.

How could I know, that in the pouring rain,
Your callous words could bring me so much pain.

Your hugs were always way too tight,
Left my body weak and with fright.

And your kisses were filled with so much force,
Too much for my rosy, pink lips to endorse.

And all your laughs were so, so fake,
Your jokes were dry, and made my head ache.

Your eyes startlingly filled me with dread,
I wished they would have been mahogany brown instead.

Your hair was a color in between black and brown,
I always begged you to keep it down.

If you had listened, and changed all of the above,
You might have been the first boy I loved.



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on Feb. 17 2012 at 8:22 pm
_emilia_ SILVER, Somers Point, New Jersey
9 articles 3 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you're going through hell, keep going."

Thnx Name tht means a lot :)

on Feb. 17 2012 at 6:11 pm
808atl19 BRONZE, Atlanta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"Life isn’t worth living unless you’re willing to take some big chances and go for broke."
- Eliot Wiggington

Oh ok it's her but ur welcome these stories u write should be on the magazine there very good! :)

on Feb. 13 2012 at 3:43 pm
_emilia_ SILVER, Somers Point, New Jersey
9 articles 3 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you're going through hell, keep going."

THANKS!!! LOL- no its M...wink wink

on Feb. 11 2012 at 4:21 pm
808atl19 BRONZE, Atlanta, Georgia
4 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life isn’t worth living unless you’re willing to take some big chances and go for broke."
- Eliot Wiggington

Good story! ^^ is that Taylor anyway the stories good

on Feb. 2 2012 at 11:03 am
_emilia_ SILVER, Somers Point, New Jersey
9 articles 3 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you're going through hell, keep going."

Thanks girlll.......

pottergirl said...
on Feb. 2 2012 at 11:01 am
pottergirl, Ventnor, New Jersey
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Good Job em!Love it!


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