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you are to deseptive
your eyes are misleading
were art though heart
were art though soul
were art though all thy want
though you are only cold
you are only mad
and you took my heart and ripped it to shreds
you took my freedom
you took my death
you took my song
you are no friend
thy art a monster
though art a beast
you once did love me
you once lived dreams
thy art lost all thy what no one could compete
your soul was so golden
your words were like water
but you out grew your notions
you out grew those words
why art though changed
when thy was a beauty
but now your a vampire
with vampire teeth




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crazedchicklol said...
Jan. 12, 2012 at 7:51 pm:
WOW epic! slightly creepy but it's in a good way and is outweigh by it's Beauty!
 
Traceyacey replied...
Jan. 12, 2012 at 7:54 pm :
thnx! :)
 
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pixxielove said...
Jan. 7, 2012 at 12:36 pm:
i like it tho i am not a fan of the vampire world
 
Traceyacey replied...
Jan. 7, 2012 at 3:37 pm :
thank u i tried 2 make it different
 
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freedomwriter7 said...
Jan. 7, 2012 at 12:35 pm:
I like it-unique topic for poetry. Very nice diction
 
Traceyacey replied...
Jan. 7, 2012 at 3:38 pm :
yeah sometimes i find myself using old english
 
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