"Somewhere In And When"

December 18, 2011
By Wired_To_Inspire PLATINUM, Coopersburg, Pennsylvania
Wired_To_Inspire PLATINUM, Coopersburg, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Your mind fights the battles, but your heart wins the war." -Liz Ruth

Somewhere in my head,there's a frightening blend
of love and anxiety only the heart can send.
It comes from within, beyond the skin, in and around my heart.
It tells me, "Believe in yourself, you know you are, a piece of beautiful art.
I do believe, I do believe that confidence is what I receive.

Somewhere when my emotions bend,
there will be a place where I can descend.
I don't know when but I do know how.
There are only some things that he can allow.
No matter what happens, I do know this,
there is something that is, but remains a wish.

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on Jan. 14 2012 at 8:43 am
recurring_resilience SILVER, Ashburn, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"These are the times that try men's souls." - Thomas Paine.

"You don't understand! I coulda had class. I coulda been a contender. I could've been somebody, instead of a bum, which is what I am." - On the Water Front

"This is my place of failure."

Your rhyming seemed a bit forced, no offense. And I think It could have flowed better if you structured it differently not word-wise but presentation wise. Aside from that great poem :)


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