"A Childhood Dream"

December 12, 2011
By Wired_To_Inspire PLATINUM, Coopersburg, Pennsylvania
Wired_To_Inspire PLATINUM, Coopersburg, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Your mind fights the battles, but your heart wins the war." -Liz Ruth


It was maybe, yes maybe ten years ago.
I had not two but one actual dream.
I was old enough to know,
the places I go,
and soon I envisioned my dream.
My one and only dream consisted of this:
I want to be a writer of many fine works,
such as this one that gives readers some quirks.
I started out small with a few rhymes,
then I wrote poems- faster than the flip of a dime.
I write about anything but not everything,
as long as I have something


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on Feb. 13 2012 at 10:56 am
A.A.Siyal BRONZE, Hyderabad, Other
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Favorite Quote:
“There is only one thing that makes a dream impossible to achieve: the fear of failure.”
Paulo Coelho, The Alchemist

'faster than the flip of a dime' wow... lyke it! great job! :)

on Jan. 14 2012 at 8:45 am
Rainbeauxs SILVER, Bridgetown, Other
7 articles 3 photos 42 comments
I loved this poem! ;D .Good job!

on Jan. 14 2012 at 8:40 am
recurring_resilience SILVER, Ashburn, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"These are the times that try men's souls." - Thomas Paine.

"You don't understand! I coulda had class. I coulda been a contender. I could've been somebody, instead of a bum, which is what I am." - On the Water Front

"This is my place of failure."

The word dream you used a tad repetitively and the flow wasn't as smooth as I beleive you might have aimed it too. Use of the word "two" in line two seemed misplaced and rhyming "rhymes" with the singular "dime" also threw it off pace. Aside from those minor details great work! :)

cookiestar said...
on Jan. 14 2012 at 8:21 am
Wow. This is well written:). It's beautiful. Good job!


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