Shot and Heartbroken

November 30, 2011
By niner PLATINUM, Hartville, Ohio
niner PLATINUM, Hartville, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Isn't it funny how you broke my heart, but I still love you with all the pieces?"
"It's easy to stand in a crowd, but it takes courage to stand alone"
"What would you attempt if you knew you could never fail?"


His view:
Terrified, he knelt down on one knee,
Never thinking that this is how it would be,
Watching the blood spread across the floor,
Hearing whispers of goodbye for forever more,
A trace of a tear sliding down his face,
Staining his shirt in the same moistened place,
His hands and legs couldn’t halt their tremble,
Beauty and courage is what she resembled,
Now he stares into her half lifeless, blue eyes,
Making a memory as she painfully dies,
Realizing it was she, who he had shot,
“Don’t go,” he cries, “you’re all that I’ve got”
Slowly he intertwines with her cold fingers,
Her voice in his head will always linger,
What’s left of her has started to fade,
Marking completion of the biggest mistake he made.

Her view:
I was told love was like a fairytale,
But my heart was broken, becoming so frail,
He is leaning at my side as I slip away,
There were so many things I wish I could say,
I wonder to myself if this was what he meant to do,
But now he whimpers the words, “I love you,”
There’s a whole in my stomach, but a bigger one in my heart,
I thought what we had was a special piece of art,
Blood is rushing from the bullet hole,
I’ll miss you and my life that you stole,
So this torture is where our life together has led,
To a hole in my heart, and the gunshot pounding in my head



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niner PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 16 2012 at 4:27 pm
niner PLATINUM, Hartville, Ohio
32 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Isn't it funny how you broke my heart, but I still love you with all the pieces?"
"It's easy to stand in a crowd, but it takes courage to stand alone"
"What would you attempt if you knew you could never fail?"

thanks! :)

on Apr. 16 2012 at 3:10 pm
mariahisabellevin PLATINUM, Santa Ana, California
32 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Now you see me, now you don't
Don't ask me where I'm at
'Cause I'm a million miles away"- Green Day

hey, i really like this ^


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