the soldier's story

December 3, 2011
By Agent__Maine BRONZE, Hoopeston, Illinois
Agent__Maine BRONZE, Hoopeston, Illinois
2 articles 0 photos 2 comments

From that cold day in Japan
Came deaths cold hand.
He came and saw that we were done for
Lost forever in the dark twisting void of deaths
Which awaits he broken hand.

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on Feb. 4 2012 at 10:14 pm
Sofia_Sorabella SILVER, Pocatello, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
A word is a bud attempting to become a twig. How can one not dream while writing? It is the pen which dreams. The blank page gives the right to dream.
- Gaston Bachelard

This is really good :) There is such a good message in so few words.

on Jan. 16 2012 at 6:37 pm
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"If you know how you feel, and so clearly what you need to say, you'll know it. I don't think you should wait. I think you should speak now." -Taylor Swift

This is kind of haunting...good job 4/5 =)

pinkowl BRONZE said...
on Dec. 27 2011 at 7:33 pm
pinkowl BRONZE, Tyrone, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Jeremiah 29:11

very good use of words! (:

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