the soldier's story

December 3, 2011
From that cold day in Japan
Came deaths cold hand.
He came and saw that we were done for
Lost forever in the dark twisting void of deaths
Which awaits he broken hand.

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DestinyDefyingGravity7 said...
Feb. 4, 2012 at 10:14 pm
This is really good :) There is such a good message in so few words.
JaneCapelle This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 16, 2012 at 6:37 pm
This is kind of haunting...good job 4/5 =)
pinkowl said...
Dec. 27, 2011 at 7:33 pm
very good use of words! (:
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