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I’m done hoping we could work it out,
My heart is too broken to ever be fixed now,
And I’m done thinking that you’ll come around,
Because every time I do, I just get let down,
So I’m done laughing at every word you say,
Although it’ll be hard, I’m gonna go my own way,
I’m done with attempting to look you in the eye,
I’ve learned that even the innocent ones are capable to lie,
I’m done with trying to impress your cold heart,
You left me here to die; lonely in the dark,
I’m done letting my heart beat so fast,
I’ll prove to you that these tears are the last,
After all, I’m done letting you tear my heart apart,
But if I turn my back now, the end of me starts





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snowleopard100 said...
Apr. 14, 2012 at 8:32 am
I love the structure of this poem with te repetition, Rhyme scheme, etc. I feel that there were certain parts that could have been expressed in a more dramatic way to fit the rest of the poem. Otherwise nice job!!
 
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