The Creator in Me

November 29, 2011
By niner PLATINUM, Hartville, Ohio
niner PLATINUM, Hartville, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Isn't it funny how you broke my heart, but I still love you with all the pieces?"
"It's easy to stand in a crowd, but it takes courage to stand alone"
"What would you attempt if you knew you could never fail?"


Hopefully one day the world will see what I see,
I wish you’d discover the creator in me,
I, myself, know that success is my fate,
Every day I dream that it won’t appear too late,
You think a failure is what I portray,
But I am much more than that, if I must say,
On these grounds I must find my place,
I will make the world remember my face,
I have it planned out on what I must be,
If only you’d discover the creator in me



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on Apr. 18 2012 at 3:48 pm
hippiechick99 GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"... How dreary to be somebody-- How public like a frog;
To tell one's name; the livelong June-- To an admiring bog"
-Emily Dickinson

I agree that this poem is mysterious. I really loved it for that; poetry that explains itself too much isn't really poetry, correct? Anyway...loved it and hope you keep writing.

on Apr. 14 2012 at 8:35 am
snowleopard100 PLATINUM, New York City, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Two roads diverged in a yellow wood, but I took the one less traveled by, and that has made all the difference."

This is a really great poem. It's not too heavily worded and uses a rhyming scheme that augments its style. The only thing that confused me was the creator in me part an what that was. But I do like how that make the poem kinda mysterious. Great job Keep it up!!!!




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