The Creator in Me

November 29, 2011
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Hopefully one day the world will see what I see,
I wish you’d discover the creator in me,
I, myself, know that success is my fate,
Every day I dream that it won’t appear too late,
You think a failure is what I portray,
But I am much more than that, if I must say,
On these grounds I must find my place,
I will make the world remember my face,
I have it planned out on what I must be,
If only you’d discover the creator in me

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hippiechick99 said...
Apr. 18, 2012 at 3:48 pm
I agree that this poem is mysterious. I really loved it for that; poetry that explains itself too much isn't really poetry, correct? Anyway...loved it and hope you keep writing.
snowleopard100 said...
Apr. 14, 2012 at 8:35 am
This is a really great poem. It's not too heavily worded and uses a rhyming scheme that augments its style. The only thing that confused me was the creator in me part an what that was. But I do like how that make the poem kinda mysterious. Great job Keep it up!!!!
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