Jet Lag

November 27, 2011
By SwagGuy101 BRONZE, Millington, Tennessee
SwagGuy101 BRONZE, Millington, Tennessee
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Planes are objects made by man

Flown with windows.....

so that people will understand

Only what the sky looks like and what the stars claim to be.

But by discovering them, you will not understand me.

Created by people with clouded mind

Just cover the truth to pass the time

While your watching the clouds as they all past by

You never sit there and think what will happen if you die.

Sitting there Full of hope and dreams

Leaves you with selfish words and themes

But you sit there and stare into your past Relying on the only thing left for you.....Jet lagg


The author's comments:
Just something I threw together to get a point across to a girl. Made a while back, if anyone looks at this just give me some pointers on this thanks.

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on Dec. 21 2011 at 1:18 pm
mfischer SILVER, Northfield, Minnesota
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Pointers - Make it more meaningful, like you really mean what you are saying. Do you want her? Or do you need time to think. There is alot of power into this poem. I really brings out sensitivity. I like it though it is really good.




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