Unmended

November 28, 2011
By Plain-Jane ELITE, Grandview, Missouri
Plain-Jane ELITE, Grandview, Missouri
108 articles 2 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And the Lamb at the center of the throne will be their Shepherd. He will guide them to springs of living water; and God will wipe away every tear from their eyes." Revelation 7:17


Lifeless.
Like a doll gazing from a chair in the corner.
Painted smile.
Frozen eyes.
Peaceful.
Like a calm sea on a breezeless morn.
Still waters.
Endless vision.
Alert.
Like a serpent prepared to strike.
Determined mind.
Flawless poise.
Aching.
Like a newborn fawn crying for its mother.
Misguided direction.
Terrifying world.
Thus my heart has been.
Lifeless, yet alert.
Peaceful, yet aching.
Dead, yet alive.
Serene, yet empty.
Thus my heart is for eternity, unmended.



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on Dec. 9 2011 at 8:29 pm
Prometheus PLATINUM, East Aurora, New York
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Well written. What a paradox!

on Dec. 9 2011 at 7:53 pm
slaborin98 BRONZE, Salem, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
\"Live like no tomorrow\"

wow that is amazingg you better keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!

on Dec. 2 2011 at 4:59 pm
sunshine7223 SILVER, Holdenville, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"Afterall, a loose screw doesn't want to need, and a hammer doesn't want to be needed." -Me

"Those who observe with their eyes closed and mouths open, are usually not as wise as those who allow their minds to wander freely." -Me

Okay, I am seriously in love with your writing style. It is so similar to mine, (not being conceited, lol.) This is amazing! Just like all of the others! PLEASE keep writing! :) You've got extreme talent!!!


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