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When the fog has been lifted
and the earth has finally shifted
you see in a new way
you start a new day
and when that day comes
the cold ice, it numbs
the sun melts it away
you start a new day
you search and you holler
when it grabs you by the collar
you don't run, you play
you start a new day.



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CrazyBroadwayGirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 6:32 pm:
I thought that was beautiful and it doesn't need to be much better!! :)
 
sunshine7223 replied...
Dec. 2, 2011 at 6:04 pm :
Wow, you really blew me away! I usually HATE short poems, but you did an amazing job! I love what it is about! :) 5/5 :))
 
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Aaliyahthepoet123 said...
Nov. 30, 2011 at 9:09 am:
Sometimes you have to let it happen. i'M saying this because i have read many comments from you asking people to read your poetry. However, I think this was good not great but if you would continue to write it could be much better.
 
Jeast10 replied...
Dec. 11, 2011 at 12:16 am :
Uuum you must have the wrong person. I don't recognize you.
 
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