Start a New Day

November 26, 2011
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When the fog has been lifted
and the earth has finally shifted
you see in a new way
you start a new day
and when that day comes
the cold ice, it numbs
the sun melts it away
you start a new day
you search and you holler
when it grabs you by the collar
you don't run, you play
you start a new day.

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CrazyBroadwayGirl said...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 6:32 pm
I thought that was beautiful and it doesn't need to be much better!! :)
sunshine7223 replied...
Dec. 2, 2011 at 6:04 pm
Wow, you really blew me away! I usually HATE short poems, but you did an amazing job! I love what it is about! :) 5/5 :))
Aaliyahthepoet123 said...
Nov. 30, 2011 at 9:09 am
Sometimes you have to let it happen. i'M saying this because i have read many comments from you asking people to read your poetry. However, I think this was good not great but if you would continue to write it could be much better.
Jeast10 replied...
Dec. 11, 2011 at 12:16 am
Uuum you must have the wrong person. I don't recognize you.
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