Start a New Day

November 26, 2011
By Jeast10 GOLD, Beaumont, Texas
Jeast10 GOLD, Beaumont, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"when nothing goes right... go left."


When the fog has been lifted
and the earth has finally shifted
you see in a new way
you start a new day
and when that day comes
the cold ice, it numbs
the sun melts it away
you start a new day
you search and you holler
when it grabs you by the collar
you don't run, you play
you start a new day.



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Jeast10 GOLD said...
on Dec. 11 2011 at 12:16 am
Jeast10 GOLD, Beaumont, Texas
10 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"when nothing goes right... go left."

Uuum you must have the wrong person. I don't recognize you.

on Dec. 2 2011 at 6:04 pm
sunshine7223 SILVER, Holdenville, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"Afterall, a loose screw doesn't want to need, and a hammer doesn't want to be needed." -Me

"Those who observe with their eyes closed and mouths open, are usually not as wise as those who allow their minds to wander freely." -Me

Wow, you really blew me away! I usually HATE short poems, but you did an amazing job! I love what it is about! :) 5/5 :))

on Dec. 1 2011 at 6:32 pm
AllThingsTheatre BRONZE, Vidor, Texas
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I thought that was beautiful and it doesn't need to be much better!! :)

on Nov. 30 2011 at 9:09 am
Aaliyahthepoet123 BRONZE, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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Sometimes you have to let it happen. i'M saying this because i have read many comments from you asking people to read your poetry. However, I think this was good not great but if you would continue to write it could be much better.


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