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The diamond ice

that glitter-gleams
On this frigged morn,
Sparkles; thus

like fairy-lights,
The naked trees adorn.

The spear-head icicles that hang




like swords;
In wind they fall.
While silent sheets



of pure white snow
Fall gently over all.

The icy wind

that whispers through:
The frosty boughs do shake!
Oh chilly zephyr

of the north-
All quiver in your wake!





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IceFox416 said...
Dec. 5, 2011 at 7:41 pm

Tess, you are epic! I've read this poem before, but it still astounds me! It's amazing, your wording, and all that! It really makes you feel like you are experiencing the calmness and whiteness of winter. (I'm using way to many exclamation marks, lol)You really have a great way with words.; keep writing (and poerying, if that's a word, which I doubt.)

5/5

 

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IceFox416 replied...
Dec. 5, 2011 at 7:42 pm
Jeez . . . I always seem to post such long comments without realizing it, lol. :)
 
Iamme11 replied...
Dec. 11, 2011 at 7:35 pm

LoL. Brilliant Kayleigh.

Thanks for the advice anyway!

 
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