Footprints

By
One two
Where you find one
You find the other
Big or small
Shaped in all ways
Some steping into others
Others stand-alone.





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rockinitout said...
Oct. 27, 2008 at 8:22 pm
Yes, I agree with Rabbitholeexplorador--you have a great beginning of a poem, but it needs more
 
Allice* said...
Oct. 22, 2008 at 7:40 pm
I like this piece of yours. I feel it describes the social and emotional aspect of life; how some people stand together, or want to be like another, and yet there are still others that are their own person and want to stand alone. Keep it up!
 
13blkrosez said...
Oct. 20, 2008 at 8:30 pm
this is pretty cute i am imaging differnt footprints in the sand
 
RabbitHoleExplorador said...
Oct. 13, 2008 at 1:09 am
I think this could use some work. It seems like an incomplete thought...
 
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