Heavy Shadows

April 23, 2008
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Is everybody looking at me?
What do they think?
Can they see it?
That it's on me

The burden is too heavy to bear
Its like a heavy shadow I swear
One tiny mistake
And the big price I pay

It burns a whole in my heart
To think one day my life wont start
Tears roll down my face
As I get ready to start my day

Is everybody looking at me?
What do they think?
Can they see it?
That it's on me





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hazeleye14 said...
Nov. 23, 2008 at 11:27 pm
okkk dis is a good startt i think u cld hav added to itt showedd more effortt but other than dat its good :)
 
stacey said...
Nov. 3, 2008 at 6:20 pm
this poem is really good keep i up
 
meltingmel said...
Oct. 23, 2008 at 9:11 pm
wow i cried that was really sad but very good dont you dare stop writing!!!
 
13bllkrosez said...
Oct. 20, 2008 at 8:33 pm
wow, i really like this poem : ), it reminds me perfectly of how i felt when i was going through a tough time, and my eyes started to tear just remembering that this is the way i felt and that a perfect stranger can describe it so well, i gave you a 5/5
 
the worst poet said...
Oct. 13, 2008 at 3:57 pm
thats a good poem keep it up
 
Little_Lone_Fishie said...
Oct. 6, 2008 at 10:34 pm
wow. what you wrote really means alot to me. (based on a point in my life) I think its amazing, and you rock and such, so go you! :D
 
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