November 11, 2011
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I feel so alone
Does no one see
Im always sad
Is it just me

How can no one tell
That Im dying inside
Am I that good of an actor
Would they even care if tomorrow i died?

Or do they just not care
And chose to ignore
my desperate plea
For an open door

What would happen
If I let them know
Would they run away
Or help me go

Somebody, anybody
Look at me for real
See past my front
Look past the steal

I guess its my fault
That no one knows
BUt maybe I regret that
Because all Im feeling is alone

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Acastillo said...
Dec. 18, 2011 at 6:27 pm
I really liked this because I could relate to it.
real_me@26,33 replied...
Dec. 18, 2011 at 6:54 pm
yeah, i think we all could at one time or another, thanx :) 
sunshine7223 said...
Dec. 5, 2011 at 2:21 am
I LOVE THIS, really! The only thing I can say is that you spelled "steal" wrong. It should be "steel." But other than that, this is seriously amazing. I loved your rhyming. I loved the whole poem. And nice title. I also loved how you ended it with the same word as your title is. I tend to do that alot too, lol. FANTASTIC JOB! SO surprised you haven't got any comments yet, haha. Keep writing!! :)
real_me@26,33 replied...
Dec. 5, 2011 at 2:23 am

thanx :) lol it was a newer one :) thanx 


real_me@26,33 replied...
Dec. 5, 2011 at 2:25 am
help!!!!! i did spell it wrong haha sad face lol
sassysarahkittyemo replied...
Dec. 18, 2011 at 12:35 am
i think it's really good :)
real_me@26,33 replied...
Dec. 18, 2011 at 12:37 am
Thanx :) 
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