Alone

November 11, 2011
By iloveu32 SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
iloveu32 SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
9 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nobody can make you feel inferior without their consent. -Eleanor Roosevelt


I feel so alone
Does no one see
Im always sad
Is it just me

How can no one tell
That Im dying inside
Am I that good of an actor
Would they even care if tomorrow i died?

Or do they just not care
And chose to ignore
my desperate plea
For an open door

What would happen
If I let them know
Would they run away
Or help me go

Somebody, anybody
Look at me for real
See past my front
Look past the steal

I guess its my fault
That no one knows
BUt maybe I regret that
Because all Im feeling is alone



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on Dec. 18 2011 at 6:54 pm
iloveu32 SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
9 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nobody can make you feel inferior without their consent. -Eleanor Roosevelt

yeah, i think we all could at one time or another, thanx :) 

Acastillo GOLD said...
on Dec. 18 2011 at 6:27 pm
Acastillo GOLD, Phoenix, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
Just because you have flaws, doesn't mean you aren't beautiful ~Zayn Malik

I really liked this because I could relate to it.

on Dec. 18 2011 at 12:37 am
iloveu32 SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
9 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nobody can make you feel inferior without their consent. -Eleanor Roosevelt

Thanx :) 

on Dec. 18 2011 at 12:35 am
sassysarahemokitty BRONZE, San Francisco, California
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Favorite Quote:
my heart cracks every time some one teases me or says something about me. ive tried,over and over and over to open my eyes. look at my life and tell me when did i die? cuz i'm not alive.- Sarah Morrison

i think it's really good :)

on Dec. 5 2011 at 2:25 am
iloveu32 SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
9 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nobody can make you feel inferior without their consent. -Eleanor Roosevelt

help!!!!! i did spell it wrong haha sad face lol

on Dec. 5 2011 at 2:23 am
iloveu32 SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
9 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nobody can make you feel inferior without their consent. -Eleanor Roosevelt

thanx :) lol it was a newer one :) thanx 

 


on Dec. 5 2011 at 2:21 am
sunshine7223 SILVER, Holdenville, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"Afterall, a loose screw doesn't want to need, and a hammer doesn't want to be needed." -Me

"Those who observe with their eyes closed and mouths open, are usually not as wise as those who allow their minds to wander freely." -Me

I LOVE THIS, really! The only thing I can say is that you spelled "steal" wrong. It should be "steel." But other than that, this is seriously amazing. I loved your rhyming. I loved the whole poem. And nice title. I also loved how you ended it with the same word as your title is. I tend to do that alot too, lol. FANTASTIC JOB! SO surprised you haven't got any comments yet, haha. Keep writing!! :)


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