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I feel so alone
Does no one see
Im always sad
Is it just me

How can no one tell
That Im dying inside
Am I that good of an actor
Would they even care if tomorrow i died?

Or do they just not care
And chose to ignore
my desperate plea
For an open door

What would happen
If I let them know
Would they run away
Or help me go

Somebody, anybody
Look at me for real
See past my front
Look past the steal

I guess its my fault
That no one knows
BUt maybe I regret that
Because all Im feeling is alone



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AcastilloThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 18, 2011 at 6:27 pm:
I really liked this because I could relate to it.
 
real_me@26,33 replied...
Dec. 18, 2011 at 6:54 pm :
yeah, i think we all could at one time or another, thanx :) 
 
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sunshine7223 said...
Dec. 5, 2011 at 2:21 am:
I LOVE THIS, really! The only thing I can say is that you spelled "steal" wrong. It should be "steel." But other than that, this is seriously amazing. I loved your rhyming. I loved the whole poem. And nice title. I also loved how you ended it with the same word as your title is. I tend to do that alot too, lol. FANTASTIC JOB! SO surprised you haven't got any comments yet, haha. Keep writing!! :)
 
real_me@26,33 replied...
Dec. 5, 2011 at 2:23 am :

thanx :) lol it was a newer one :) thanx 

 

 
real_me@26,33 replied...
Dec. 5, 2011 at 2:25 am :
help!!!!! i did spell it wrong haha sad face lol
 
sassysarahkittyemo replied...
Dec. 18, 2011 at 12:35 am :
i think it's really good :)
 
real_me@26,33 replied...
Dec. 18, 2011 at 12:37 am :
Thanx :) 
 
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