Milk Chocolate Stars

November 11, 2011
By KaylaKewlKat93 SILVER, Burlington, North Carolina
KaylaKewlKat93 SILVER, Burlington, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
I give myself very good advice,
But I very seldom follow it,
That explains the trouble that I'm always in,
Be patient, is very good advice,
But the waiting makes me curious,
And I'd love the change,
Should something strange begin,
Well I went along my merry way,
And I never stopped to reason,
I should have know there'd be a price to pay,
Someday...someday,
I give myself very good advice,
But I very seldom follow it,
Will I ever learn to do the things I should?
Will I ever learn to do the things I should?


Milk chocolate stars
unravel from their aluminum home
and shower the earth’s tongue
with their core’s tiny domes

A core holding caramel
as thick as tree sap
River of goo coursing through the land
acting as a map

A map guiding the way
through the wild nuget thickets
Back into your arms
Heartbeats in time with the crickets

Laying under these freckles
of God’s mysterious magic with you
I cannot help but question
If you’re following the caramel river too



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on Nov. 22 2011 at 8:23 pm
fineartsismypassion BRONZE, Maumee, Ohio
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I really liked the details in this and the mystery affect it has. good job!


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