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Milk chocolate stars
unravel from their aluminum home
and shower the earth’s tongue
with their core’s tiny domes

A core holding caramel
as thick as tree sap
River of goo coursing through the land
acting as a map

A map guiding the way
through the wild nuget thickets
Back into your arms
Heartbeats in time with the crickets

Laying under these freckles
of God’s mysterious magic with you
I cannot help but question
If you’re following the caramel river too





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fineartsismypassion said...
Nov. 22, 2011 at 8:23 pm
I really liked the details in this and the mystery affect it has. good job!
 
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