the cottage

November 14, 2011
By artmantist BRONZE, Willemstad, Other
artmantist BRONZE, Willemstad, Other
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the cottage
the place where I go desperately and anxiously
The place where I walk oddly shoeless
Because my toes feel uncomfortable
when the feel the cold floor
The place where I violently and abruptly my insanity, my craziness,my twisted unknown artistry
Where my hair raises up
because of the goosebumps
Because of the my frosty,twisted and dark imagination
It's the place where I wake up at 2 am to write what the sleeping morning whispers me
This place is mine
This place is my precious
It's my well preserved iron trunk


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on Dec. 16 2011 at 10:04 pm
Plain-Jane ELITE, Grandview, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"And the Lamb at the center of the throne will be their Shepherd. He will guide them to springs of living water; and God will wipe away every tear from their eyes." Revelation 7:17

lol couldnt help but think of Lord of the Rings at the "my precious
 line. some of the adverbs are in weird places like where adjectives should be. great descriptions!

on Nov. 26 2011 at 9:51 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

wow very good. i love how u express so much emotion towards something that means so much to just you. no one else can feel what you feel towards the cottage. :) its very good. i love it

on Nov. 21 2011 at 6:41 pm
artmantist BRONZE, Willemstad, Other
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tnx kim121819,Srry for the misspelling

on Nov. 21 2011 at 2:05 pm
Kimmie_Kat SILVER, Orlando, Florida
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Gr8 poem! It's really nice!

on Nov. 19 2011 at 8:45 pm
artmantist BRONZE, Willemstad, Other
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Im glad u liked it. Its my first poem. Do it means a lot that ppl like it. tnk u

on Nov. 19 2011 at 8:34 pm
artmantist BRONZE, Willemstad, Other
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tnk u very much, its the first poem i post. And knowing that already 2 pll like makes me happy. 

tngurl1 said...
on Nov. 19 2011 at 8:29 pm
tngurl1, Tomball, Texas
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good poem very discriptive and many emotions. i really like it

on Nov. 19 2011 at 6:41 pm
artmantist BRONZE, Willemstad, Other
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tnk u, sure , i will check out ur work

on Nov. 19 2011 at 6:17 pm
Kayotic PLATINUM, Goodyear, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
You aren't having fun unless you're commiting sin~ Priest

I really like it!I hope to see more f your work submitted!Will you read some of my articles?

on Nov. 19 2011 at 5:24 pm
artmantist BRONZE, Willemstad, Other
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Hello, srry for the misspelling and missing words. I didnt notice it when I submitted it.




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