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Her smooth fingers
Coat a car windshield
With sun-kissed cream.
Dipped in butter soap,
Sponges soak up dirt,
Reveal the lost glimmer.
She sprays hose-water
Like an April shower,
Onto the glossy hood.
Her shiny reflection
Meanders in droplets
Down metallic doors.
Froth tickles her toes
As a bubble of delight
Escapes from pink lips;
It frolics with soapsuds,
Dancing to the melody
Of her sweet laughter.

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Blueeyedgirl18VIP said...
Jan. 3 at 10:59 am:

Very descriptive:) great job:)

 
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Big k said...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 10:06 am:

this was a wierd poem buthas its good too

 
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dakotawrightVIP said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 11:02 am:

Good Imagery. I really liked this short and sweet poem.

 

 
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artmantistVIP said...
Nov. 19, 2011 at 5:31 pm:

hello, nice poem. Would u guys wanna check out my work. its called the cottage 

thank u

 
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Natasha1994VIP said...
Nov. 10, 2011 at 1:13 pm:

i think this poem is more for guys than girls good job though

 
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Lexie96VIP said...
Oct. 25, 2011 at 6:26 pm:

Good piece, you make it sound like a fun job... Check out my work?

 
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JamesODalaighVIP said...
Oct. 23, 2011 at 7:49 am:

Really loved it!

 
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GirlWhoWroteVIP said...
Oct. 14, 2011 at 6:36 pm:

Wow, way good! Please check out mine, it's called "Murder"!

 
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snakebreeder77 said...
Sept. 14, 2011 at 1:55 pm:

I never thought that anyone could ever make a chore sound fun!!!!!!

 

 
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emilybwritesVIP said...
Aug. 20, 2011 at 9:56 pm:

please check out my poems "Forgotten Domain" and "The Others" and rate and comment on them :)

 
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IrishDancerxoxoVIP said...
Aug. 20, 2011 at 8:40 pm:

That was cool to read, it kinf of makes me want to wash my car now

 
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emilybwritesVIP said...
Jul. 29, 2011 at 9:06 am:

wow i loved how you made washing a car sound glamourous!

 
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NaleDawgVIP said...
Jul. 20, 2011 at 10:03 pm:

nice, look at my work?

 
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Rachet said...
May 2, 2011 at 10:58 am:

I loved how i felt like i was there well i read it, i could see the water.. and the bubbles! amazing!

 
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hwilliamsrocks said...
May 2, 2011 at 10:46 am:

my dog ate a squirrel yesterday!!!!

 
hwilliamsrocks replied...
May 2, 2011 at 10:46 am :

sorry i just had to post that

 
Bgeek24VIP replied...
May 13, 2011 at 8:12 pm :

uhmmm.... not neccesary

 
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overachiever-writing said...
Mar. 1, 2011 at 8:37 pm:

This poem has a refreshing lightheartedness to it

 
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Aderes18VIP said...
Feb. 27, 2011 at 4:10 pm:

This poem reminds me of when I wash a car and just whenever I have fun with water. It just totally gets all those emotions into one piece of poetry. 

 
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J-Dawg330 said...
Feb. 14, 2011 at 8:47 am:

I think it was very nice you should definatly write more

 
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doubleS said...
Jan. 21, 2011 at 11:03 am:

It was great imagery, in every line.

 
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brodiephillips said...
Dec. 9, 2010 at 5:36 pm:

hahahajhaHA NICE

 
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jward24895VIP said...
Jul. 22, 2010 at 6:13 pm:

I really like how, by adding description, you can take something so simple as washing a car and turn it into something spectacular.

 
miss.snw replied...
Sept. 9, 2010 at 9:04 pm :

yes. So much imagery in this poem expands what you would normally envision when washing a car. Nice job.

 
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babe892 said...
Jun. 18, 2010 at 12:22 am:

I love imagery poetry like this. In many ways, it is better than telling a story with a poem because I like to walk away from a poem with a feeling or a picture in my head of what I just read. This was really great.

 
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Emily H. said...
Jun. 1, 2010 at 7:01 pm:

I really, really like the imagery of the poem.  It is simple but it paints such a pretty picture in one's head.

 
kms777 replied...
Jun. 8, 2010 at 5:14 pm :

it is so simple yet so intriguing. not many people can give such detail about something and make it sound so beautiful. myself include. i hope youll read some of mine so i need what to work on.

 
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SarahJumps said...
May 18, 2010 at 9:34 pm:

I LOVE the last four lines in this. so beautifully written. 

 
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awesomeman123 said...
Apr. 28, 2010 at 11:48 pm:

Wow. very blissful. i can't help but smiling :)

 
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Howler said...
Apr. 3, 2010 at 2:39 pm:

This makes me want to dance! Wow check out my forum its a poem called the principle people!

 
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decembersun14 said...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 10:53 am:

so sweet and moving! i loved it! your similes were awesome and your choice of words was amazing!

 
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Shabanana said...
Mar. 17, 2010 at 11:07 am:

i don't understand this poem can someone please explain?

 
mimibby replied...
Mar. 28, 2010 at 3:57 pm :

i didnt get it ether

 
Shabanana replied...
Mar. 28, 2010 at 4:31 pm :

well then can someone else please explain??

 
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Alexis M. said...
Mar. 13, 2010 at 11:04 am:

Very discreptive I loved it

 
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Julia R. said...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 9:48 pm:

Aww! That was so "bubbly". And fun. I loved it. (:

 
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summer-baby said...
Mar. 8, 2010 at 11:46 am:

i really enjoyed reading this poem. it was really cute.

 
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CHEERLEADER~4~life said...
Mar. 8, 2010 at 9:06 am:

this is a really well writen poem...
i really enjoyed reading it....keep it up!
=]

 
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sansan said...
Feb. 23, 2010 at 7:33 am:

so i realy happy for that poeme u just give it to me and i thank's u for that thank u so much.

 
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***3Lli3*** said...
Feb. 16, 2010 at 2:53 pm:

i love this.!!! Check out some of my work i hope u like it.! :) Please comment on my poems i would love to have any tips of any sort.. Check out my newest and latest ones :)

 
JJSchneiderVIP replied...
Mar. 22, 2011 at 7:18 pm :

I'm looking at your poems can you look at mine? I've spent a lot of time recently writing them but near no one has viewed them besides myself.

 
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sarahbug16 said...
Jan. 24, 2010 at 6:22 pm:

how cute, very good

 
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matthewZ said...
Jan. 4, 2010 at 8:03 pm:

nice! look at my poem too plz? http ://www.teenink .com /poetry/free_verse/article/156195/Airplanes/ rate and comment plz! thanks a million!

 
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CaptainFabulous. said...
Dec. 12, 2009 at 3:57 pm:

i really like this
love the details!
keep writing

 
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AlexisJo(: said...
Nov. 25, 2009 at 5:41 pm:

Omgshhh (: this was ah-maze-ing (: verrry descriptive (:

 
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Lanae said...
Nov. 15, 2009 at 12:01 pm:

Great description!!! <3d it! =)

 
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ariwrites94 said...
Nov. 8, 2009 at 8:50 pm:

Wonderful job!!!! you are a talented writer and keep up the good work! if u have time please check out my poem called "Sensitive Am I" and rate and leave a comment. Thanks and keep writing!

 
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Emily M. said...
Jul. 3, 2009 at 3:12 pm:

wow, great poem!!! i loved all the imagery! this really is amazing. keep on writing, please! :)

 
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hope.floats said...
May 2, 2009 at 1:55 pm:

Love love love this. =)

 
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cross-i'd-leopard said...
Apr. 20, 2009 at 3:28 am:

I agree with what feedback said. If u love this girl, add more about what makes her great. If it's just a plain old girl, then u need to add some other kind of meaning.

 
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