Hidden Men

I am something in the night
They are one group for the right
Whether it’s he or she for the plight
The difference will not change the fight

I know the blood that will be shed
They think the bud of what they said
Will have stood for liberty instead
The brood will be covered in red

I saw the gore that endured
They were a pest to machines
No fuel and they will succumb
Cutting losses will suffice

I will poison snakes galore
The ungrateful rats above
Wither under the invisible
No match against a hidden man





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thefamoustapper said...
Nov. 20, 2011 at 4:34 pm
Spectacular! One thing iIhave to say is that you don't need to look at it so mechanically! It's a poem, have fun with it! Great job, keep writing ;)
 
hardyboy9 said...
Nov. 19, 2011 at 1:45 pm
Since I am relatively new to this, I would like to hear any feedback you have, thanks.
 
Dion09 said...
Nov. 18, 2011 at 11:01 am
That's awesome Neil! Keep up the good work!
 
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