bodies

no heart no sole condemned to this body.
i shall walk this earth with no love nor hope.
fear and terror is all i could ever own.
on this planet made of grass and stone
wondering and wishing
sitting and missing





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ChaoticBliss said...
Nov. 30, 2011 at 8:29 pm

You should add commas, captialization, and punctuation.. it'll really improve the looks of this poem!

Okay, the first line when you say "No heart no sole condemned to this body." don't you mean soul 

Well I really like this poem, it's very depressing tho.. but I like reading depressing stuff tho(: Haha, it could certainly use some improvements.

Nice job, though.

 
Come-n-Gone said...
Nov. 30, 2011 at 7:52 pm
There's no capitalism and/or punctuation. I don't get where it starts or ends
 
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