bodies

November 3, 2011
By scarsonmywrist GOLD, Santa Rosa, California
scarsonmywrist GOLD, Santa Rosa, California
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Favorite Quote:
love yourself no one else does


no heart no sole condemned to this body.
i shall walk this earth with no love nor hope.
fear and terror is all i could ever own.
on this planet made of grass and stone
wondering and wishing
sitting and missing


The author's comments:
from emptiness

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ChaoticBliss said...
on Nov. 30 2011 at 8:29 pm
ChaoticBliss, Las Cruces, New Mexico
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You should add commas, captialization, and punctuation.. it'll really improve the looks of this poem!

Okay, the first line when you say "No heart no sole condemned to this body." don't you mean soul 

Well I really like this poem, it's very depressing tho.. but I like reading depressing stuff tho(: Haha, it could certainly use some improvements.

Nice job, though.


on Nov. 30 2011 at 7:52 pm
Come-n-Gone GOLD, Unionville, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Isn't it funny how it only takes a few seconds to say hi, but forever to say goodbye?

There's no capitalism and/or punctuation. I don't get where it starts or ends




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