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Exquisite Pain

White as snow,
Cold as ice,
His body lays.

On the ground,
In the night,
Nobody knows.

Of the boy,
Who alone,
Cried out in pain.

Lonliness,
And anger,
Overtook him.

Driving him,
To end it.
To end it all.

The tears slid,
Down his cheeks,
Swollen and red.

The beatings,
And abuse,
Too much to bear.

He reached,
For the Knife,
And ran far away.

In darkness,
He fled.
To meet his death.

The pressure,
Of the blade,
Against his skin.

The ribbon,
Of scarlet,
Exquisite pain.

He feels it.
The end,
It's finally here.

He draws in,
His last breath,
Forever asleep.

White as snow,
Cold as ice,
His body lays.

On the ground,
In the night,
Nobody knows.




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Cams05 said...
Dec. 17, 2011 at 8:05 am:
I like it a lot...I could see it..feel the pain..maybe it is because once I felt that way too..oh god...congratulations..very good writer
 
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DreamInTheRainThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 14, 2011 at 6:05 pm:
This is amazing.. Its kind of morbid, which i like. My mind is always morbid in its thoughts... Sometimes they take over me... I really like this poem however... Your words are amazing.
 
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DrowningInTheBrooke said...
Dec. 10, 2011 at 7:39 pm:
destyni.....chills. this is amazing
 
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Emiri said...
Nov. 27, 2011 at 6:20 am:
I like how it happened to a boy. not...that i have anythign against boys. :' there are just more fictitous suicide stories about girls than boys, so its different. I like  where you made one ling end and the other begin, too. :) nice job.
 
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pinkowlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 24, 2011 at 11:05 pm:
wow, this was so great! i loved how it was right to the point, easy to read and yet so deep! great job. it reminds me of the books written by Ellen Hopkins, you should check them out! I hope this didn't happen to anyone you know!
 
XxMidnightKissxX replied...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 8:00 am :
Thanks. And no it didn't. It was just my imagination running wild. :)
 
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sunshine7223 said...
Nov. 21, 2011 at 11:38 pm:
This is really good. :) I love how you used "On the ground, in the night, nobody knows", in the beginning and also used it in your conclusion. This reminds me of something I would write. :) Well done. Very well done. If you wouldn't mind, I'd love if you commented on some of my poems. I haven't had any published yet, but I've posted some in the poetry and lyrics thread. Please and thank you. (: I will return the favor.
 
XxMidnightKissxX replied...
Nov. 22, 2011 at 5:38 pm :
Thanks! And no problem. I'd love to check out some of your stuff. :)
 
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