Exquisite Pain

October 26, 2011
By XxMidnightKissxX SILVER, Hardinsburg, Indiana
XxMidnightKissxX SILVER, Hardinsburg, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Love me or hate me, I don't care which, just don't try and change me.


White as snow,
Cold as ice,
His body lays.

On the ground,
In the night,
Nobody knows.

Of the boy,
Who alone,
Cried out in pain.

Lonliness,
And anger,
Overtook him.

Driving him,
To end it.
To end it all.

The tears slid,
Down his cheeks,
Swollen and red.

The beatings,
And abuse,
Too much to bear.

He reached,
For the Knife,
And ran far away.

In darkness,
He fled.
To meet his death.

The pressure,
Of the blade,
Against his skin.

The ribbon,
Of scarlet,
Exquisite pain.

He feels it.
The end,
It's finally here.

He draws in,
His last breath,
Forever asleep.

White as snow,
Cold as ice,
His body lays.

On the ground,
In the night,
Nobody knows.



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Cams05 said...
on Dec. 17 2011 at 8:05 am
Cams05, Santa Marta, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"For you I was born, for you I have life, for you am I now dying." -García Marquez Of love and other demons (Garcilaso de la Vega)

"If we live a life in fear, I’ll wait a thousand years just to see you smile again"-Muse, Resistance

I like it a lot...I could see it..feel the pain..maybe it is because once I felt that way too..oh god...congratulations..very good writer

on Dec. 14 2011 at 6:05 pm
DreamInTheRain SILVER, Nevada City, California
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Favorite Quote:
Music, It Runs Through My Veins Like A River, Lyrics Flow To The Beat Of Sound.

This is amazing.. Its kind of morbid, which i like. My mind is always morbid in its thoughts... Sometimes they take over me... I really like this poem however... Your words are amazing.

on Dec. 10 2011 at 7:39 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

destyni.....chills. this is amazing

BluBliss GOLD said...
on Nov. 27 2011 at 6:20 am
BluBliss GOLD, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Bella's love for Edward was like, "Omg. He's hot. He's mine because he sparkles. Now I'll brood the wholle book while I'm with him."

I like how it happened to a boy. not...that i have anythign against boys. :' there are just more fictitous suicide stories about girls than boys, so its different. I like  where you made one ling end and the other begin, too. :) nice job.

on Nov. 25 2011 at 8:00 am
XxMidnightKissxX SILVER, Hardinsburg, Indiana
7 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love me or hate me, I don't care which, just don't try and change me.

Thanks. And no it didn't. It was just my imagination running wild. :)

pinkowl BRONZE said...
on Nov. 24 2011 at 11:05 pm
pinkowl BRONZE, Tyrone, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Jeremiah 29:11

wow, this was so great! i loved how it was right to the point, easy to read and yet so deep! great job. it reminds me of the books written by Ellen Hopkins, you should check them out! I hope this didn't happen to anyone you know!

on Nov. 22 2011 at 5:38 pm
XxMidnightKissxX SILVER, Hardinsburg, Indiana
7 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love me or hate me, I don't care which, just don't try and change me.

Thanks! And no problem. I'd love to check out some of your stuff. :)

on Nov. 21 2011 at 11:38 pm
sunshine7223 SILVER, Holdenville, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"Afterall, a loose screw doesn't want to need, and a hammer doesn't want to be needed." -Me

"Those who observe with their eyes closed and mouths open, are usually not as wise as those who allow their minds to wander freely." -Me

This is really good. :) I love how you used "On the ground, in the night, nobody knows", in the beginning and also used it in your conclusion. This reminds me of something I would write. :) Well done. Very well done. If you wouldn't mind, I'd love if you commented on some of my poems. I haven't had any published yet, but I've posted some in the poetry and lyrics thread. Please and thank you. (: I will return the favor.


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