Feelings

October 20, 2011
Suffocating once more,

Feeling it in my inner core,

I can't take any of this anymore.

It's almost like my heart is torn,

I wish I was never born.



Simple things like taking me to the store,

Or simply telling me you are proud,

But when you scream and slam the door,

I pretend I am riding on a cloud,

Imagining that I was never here in the first place.



I took a test and it said I wasn't depressed,

Maybe it is just stress.

I wish life was like a dress,

You can take it off,

And have the choice to never put it back on.





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Emiri said...
Nov. 17, 2011 at 5:15 pm
Jeez. What a life. I like the metaphor of life to dress, that was creative. For "pretend I am riding on a cloud," i'd recommend making it "i'm". but that's just me. I realy like how the rhyming worked here too. l)
 
AnimaCordis replied...
Nov. 18, 2011 at 10:26 am
Amazing imagery here, i love the idea that life could be a dress.
 
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