Fly high love.

October 4, 2011
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My heart is weak but my mind is strong and that's the reason why i cant love you. You want to love me but i don't let you because I am afraid. And you wonder how can such an intelligent person be afraid of loving. It is because I never felt love. I know emptiness, anger,bitterness and pain as love. My heart is cold like frozen chocolate that's why i can't love you. I feel tears welling up in my eyes but i don't let them fall, its a sign of weakness. I want to see a strong me not a weak me. i don't want to be vulnerable because ill be weak and weak people don't survive in this world. Teach me how to love you so much that i will let you fly even when i can't breathe when you are not next to me. Teach me how to lean on your shoulder when I am suffocating and i don't want to seem vulnerable. teach me how to look into your eyes and feel love for you and only you. I will pay attention as you teach and maybe finally I will have found a savior to save my soul. Save me if you are courageous enough and worthy of my love.

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Shmelmo said...
Oct. 11, 2011 at 6:14 pm
I really like the meaning of this poem. It's very deep and relatable. I would have to agree though, that it would be better in poem form... nice work...keep it up :)
FangPoet said...
Oct. 8, 2011 at 4:05 pm
I did like it but I think you should have put it in poem format. Makes it feel more like a poem rather then reading a paragraph. But over all it was very passionate,ang this was something i could relate to.
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