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The feeling is still there

What time has passed years have gone by and i still think of you i am worried about what may have happened oh how i miss you....we had good and bad times i cry when i see you the everlasting craving i have for you is unbearable....its something i don't want to go away an addicting taste is what I call it never to end of start over again its all a beautiful taste and passionate pain all jumbled up in my head so confused but yest there is no ending...but the feelings are there i still feel about you



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Lexie96 said...
Nov. 2, 2011 at 6:22 pm:

I love this! :) It's like the story of my life. I love the end and I love that you used the word 'everlasting', I hardly ever see that word anymore and it makes me sad. Great piece!

Check out my poem Sowing Poppies sometime?

 
Misunderstookgirl93 replied...
Jan. 27, 2012 at 9:12 am :
hey thank you for the compliment..I really apreciate it.Maybe we can get other ppl we know to read each others work...like a team partnership
 
Lexie96 replied...
Jan. 28, 2012 at 10:36 am :
That would be great, I'll be sure to spread the word on my page and with my comments.
 
Misunderstookgirl93 replied...
Apr. 13, 2012 at 10:47 am :
Ok thats great amd ill do the same i love ur work also
 
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